This writing task was about a language experience. Our teachers brought different kinds of chocolate to school and we got to eat it! We tried white chocolate, milk chocolate, dark chocolate, caramel chocolate and pink chocolate. We could write about it in any way we liked but our teachers hoped we would use lots of describing language and our senses.
You have done a good job of using ideas from your senses to talk about the chocolate. You have also used some good adjectives. Next time try to use a range of different sentence beginnings.
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